Comments on: Stony River’s Microfiction Monday #2

By: The Skald

The Skald — Wed, 06 Jan 2010 21:20:14 +0000

@southlakesmom Go to the beach! Shed the sack, and let’s go surfing Thank you.

@Bill It was really quite fun to visit everyone writing these little stories! Happy New Year to you too.

@Jillien A pleasure to visit. As racy, bold, and magnificent as all my daughters and wife

Thanks for dropping by everybody!

By: Jillien

Jillien — Tue, 05 Jan 2010 04:21:29 +0000

Great Story! I agree with Susan; you packed a lot of story into very few words!

Thanks for visiting me over @ The Infamous! Happy New Year to ya

By: Bill

Bill — Tue, 05 Jan 2010 03:09:21 +0000

Great take on the picture, enjoyed the PS. Thanks for stopping by the blog today. Happy New Year

By: southlakesmom

southlakesmom — Tue, 05 Jan 2010 00:59:41 +0000

I think she’s wearing the bikini underneath the dangerous dress…

Nicely done!

By: The Skald

The Skald — Tue, 05 Jan 2010 00:46:47 +0000

@Susan at Stony River Thank you Susan. I believe my wife thinks that P.S. should be a continuing education requirement for marriage

@Peggy Thanks for dropping by Peggy. Been round to visit several of you via Stony River and that Mr. Linky thingy. I stumbled upon Susan’s site via My Nasty Romance – been a fan of his writing for quite some time. Now I’ve a few more writers to envy

@Mama Zen Thank you Mama Zen ~ I like that name

@Thom Thanks Thom ~ yup, those intriguing creatures are worth the study… hehehe:P

@hope It is quite fun!! Playing with words in a constrained space… it’s almost like prose haiku About thirty-six years ago I was driving by this beach on my Sportster – a gal in a yellow bikini was life-guarding… I married her! Gotta say, I’m a fan of minimalism at the beach

By: hope

hope — Tue, 05 Jan 2010 00:18:13 +0000

Fun, isn’t it?

And I like your wardrobe much better than this fashionista’s! Have a good week!

By: Thom

Thom — Mon, 04 Jan 2010 20:06:29 +0000

Loved you story. It was great. Your PS was something else. I’d further my understanding as well

By: Mama Zen

Mama Zen — Mon, 04 Jan 2010 19:56:45 +0000

I love this one!

By: Peggy

Peggy — Mon, 04 Jan 2010 19:41:33 +0000

Son of a son of a sailor:

This is my first time here and I sure like what I see.
Your take on Susan’s picture is really really good!
I will be back to read more!
Nice to meet you btw.

By: Susan at Stony River

Susan at Stony River — Mon, 04 Jan 2010 18:41:28 +0000

I loved it, so much story and setting brought out in just a few words –
And must admit to loving that PS too!
LOL
Happy Monday! Goodbye holidays!